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Re: What this semester brings...

Post by Everybody gets One on Fri Feb 22, 2008 9:19 am

nice story! cliche to the max. but nice.
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Re: What this semester brings...

Post by Spanky on Sat Feb 23, 2008 5:33 am

It being cliche is a big part of the story. If it wasn't cliche it would be extremely hard for the audience to grasp what is actually going on. One of my teachers taught me this. So this way there isnt much explaining to the story needed. People know what might be happening at the end.

The point is that the ending is what the audience expect it to be...but not exactly how they expected it to happen. So i think i still need to change things.

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